Six Sentence Sunday: The Pirate and the Selkie (WT) #sixsunday

Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday. In sticking with my ongoing #sixsunday theme of posting from my current WIP, here is this week’s six.

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Ellie held tight to her anger. “I await your clarification with bated breath.”

He blew out a huff. “Your sarcasm is showing.”

She kicked at the hem of her skirt, pasted to her legs by the wind. “Better than these blasted petticoats, I guess.”

 

About Rebecca Hart

Im a single parent of three and a published author of romance in all sorts of sub-genres. A full time IT geek, Managing Editor of Roane Publishing, cover artist and a reformed gaming addict -- I live to write fantasy peppered with a dash of romantic nonsense :P Addicted to all things pirates, penguins, Johnny Depp and rum. Follow me on Twitter: @Rebelhart69

Posted on November 20, 2011, in #sixsunday, Call of the Sea, Fantasy, Fiction, My Writing, Romance, Six Sentence Sunday and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 13 Comments.

  1. That last line made me grin.

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  2. Heather Thurmeier

    I love sarcasm. Great snippet!

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  3. Ooh, so is this a historical!? Or is petticoats more sarcasm? 🙂

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  4. I like the way you worked the period/setting into the scene while you set up the discord. Great six!

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  5. Ooo, nice exchange and tension between these two. Well done.

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  6. I always love good sarcasm. Nicely done.

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  7. Sounds like someone is PISSED! 🙂 Great job.

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  8. Beautifully executed!

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  9. I love a good bickering scene, though it’s hard to be taking seriously when your petticoats are in the way. LOL

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  10. I like the exchange these two have, tinged with sarcasm and spirited. Nice one, Rebecca!

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  11. hehehe! I love the build up in this, great shots back and forth which makes me want to keep reading! Nice six! 😀

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  12. Love the snark in this. “Your sarcasm is showing.” lol.

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