Six Sentence Sunday: The Pirate and the Selkie (WT) #sixsunday
Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday. In sticking with my ongoing #sixsunday theme of posting from my current WIP, here is this week’s six.
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Ellie held tight to her anger. “I await your clarification with bated breath.”
He blew out a huff. “Your sarcasm is showing.”
She kicked at the hem of her skirt, pasted to her legs by the wind. “Better than these blasted petticoats, I guess.”
Posted on November 20, 2011, in #sixsunday, Call of the Sea, Fantasy, Fiction, My Writing, Romance, Six Sentence Sunday and tagged #sixsunday, Fantasy, Romance, Six Sentence Sunday. Bookmark the permalink. 13 Comments.
That last line made me grin.
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I love sarcasm. Great snippet!
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Ooh, so is this a historical!? Or is petticoats more sarcasm? 🙂
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Yes – takes place in 1650 — this part anyway. The story starts with Daniel at 11 years old and follows them both through to adulthood.
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I like the way you worked the period/setting into the scene while you set up the discord. Great six!
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Ooo, nice exchange and tension between these two. Well done.
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I always love good sarcasm. Nicely done.
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Sounds like someone is PISSED! 🙂 Great job.
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Beautifully executed!
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I love a good bickering scene, though it’s hard to be taking seriously when your petticoats are in the way. LOL
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I like the exchange these two have, tinged with sarcasm and spirited. Nice one, Rebecca!
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hehehe! I love the build up in this, great shots back and forth which makes me want to keep reading! Nice six! 😀
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Love the snark in this. “Your sarcasm is showing.” lol.
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